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You were epic until you weren't,
Like a movie that ends bad
Or a dream becoming a nightmare.
You've really been an example of
Another somebody done somebody wrong song
Some country singer once sang.
"Adios," as they say in Spanish.
I'm ending my subscription to you,
It's as easy as pushing delete.
You're expired and I'm subscribing
To what I've always deserved.

ยฉ 2023 Loly Rinn
11-Line Poetic Ponderings
Photo by Ujesh Krishnan on Unsplash
Published inEleven Lines


  1. Wow! This is an awesome poem, Loly!! I love it!! I think maybe you could/should make this into a song too! Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!!!

    • Long overdue – Thanks! ๐Ÿ™‚

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